Giving Basic Writing Advice
... endeavor, there are some basic first steps to take before shooting for the stars. Just glancing at the manuscript, I knew it needed a lot of work. And, interestingly, I was surprised to see so many errors in a simple 600 word story. It seems as we progress in learning the craft of writing, we forget that we didn't know the very basics at one time either. When critiquing, or giving writing advice, it's important to begin with the positive aspects of the manuscript. If the errors are basic and abundant, you may also want to state them in generic terms, not ... a manuscript you have, or rewrite the 1st paragraph of two of the authors' manuscript. If there are just too many errors, for time's sake you can make a list of proper manuscript formatting tips. This is the approach I took. I started out with the 'positive:' This is a wonderful idea for a children's book and has great potential, especially that both of you are professionals in the health field. Children will certainly benefit from the story's information. It could use some tweaking though. Then I added a brief sentence: Here are a few tips for writing and formatting a manuscript ...
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